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*sigh* Can't sleep,
What's wrong with me?
Something's outside,
calling me.
Who is that
standing outside,
drawing me toward him
with his mind?
Something is wrong,
I can't pull away.
Unspoken words
compelling me to stray
from the safety of my bed.
He pulls me closer;
I don't want to be here.
let me go,
let me sleep
fighting the pull,
wanting to weep.
I scream
but only in my head.
No sound escapes my lips of lead,
sewn shut by his hypnotic gaze.
I struggle, but closer still,
drawn to him by his will.
My feet won't listen
no longer are they mine.
Now at his side
his arms wrap 'round my waist.
Lips parting, ready to taste
the life blood flowing through my veins.
My head tilts back
of its own volition,
placing my neck in prim position
for him to drink his fill.
My heart pounds
as he draws near,
caught in my throat,
chocked with fear.
A sharp pain,
then numbness flows
through my viens
as my life is drawn away.
I can't feel my body.
I am floating away
on a cloud of mist,
caught in his deadly embrace.
A moment is like eternity.
Color drains from my face;
my eyes, once brown,
now turn ebony.
My heart slows down,
my breath is labored,
as he ends his feed
i feel my life
slip away from me.
I wake to darkness
I hear nothing
I see nothing
I know nothing
When my body died
so died the one attached to it.
The girl I was
no longer exists.
A voice whispers
inside my head.
Aliana
is all it says.
Who is Aliana?
Is she Me?
Only time will tell
who now lives
inside this shell.
My head begins to clear.
I feel something in me;
A gnawing at my center.
Now I know what I must be.
This feeling will become my friend.
All I will know;
Forever more;
This Hunger that will never be saited
One thought is all I have left,
as i rise to face this unwanted fate.
If I want to survive,
I Must Feed.
- by animewolf16 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/10/2009 |
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- Title: My Turning
- Artist: animewolf16
- Description: I was inspired to write this after reading a few books by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes. It was meant to be my character description on Bite Fight so don’t accuse me of steeling it from there, it’s under my account. This is my first arena entry so be honest but fair. PLEASE COMMENT ^^ Im Desperate for Feed Back Here!!!
- Date: 01/10/2009
- Tags: turning vampire bite vampires
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kristalstjean - 01/29/2009
- amazing amazing! the beginning about it, about not being able to sleep and such cause your so attached to someone, has happened to me on countless occasions.127353784938/5 biggrin
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- Vampira_Alice_Cullen - 01/29/2009
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Jake. Its amazing, I love it. -Hugs- Please write more okay? Love yu.
-Alice. - Report As Spam
- Vampire_Bella_Smith - 01/21/2009
- Jake this is amazing your gifted! "Love you!" -hugs Jake and walks out-
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- cherriesqueen - 01/19/2009
- omg this is amazing your so talented "jake" lol -hugs you tightly-
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- iChibi-Desu - 01/18/2009
- OMG ITS FREAKING AMAZING!!! *dies* 10000000000000000000/5!!!
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- Rose_Dash - 01/11/2009
- Wow.That a really good poem.5/5
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- sporosofyadah - 01/10/2009
- This is pretty good. It reminded me of Salem's Lot.
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