"What We Could Be"

• Artist: Dissolve the Pain
• Description: It's just a song I wrote. Please rate and I really want some comments (even if they are mean)! I want to know what your opinion is. Thanks!
  
  This is a song about the guy I like right now. He is ultra awesome and I miss him when I am away from him. The story I am currently writing is about the same guy. My story is half fiction and half non-fiction.
  
  Check out my site for a story I'm writing:
  
  www.s13.invisionfree.com/elena_space
• Date: 01/12/2009
• Tags: love

[Chorus]
His breath sounds heavenly
He smiles beautifully
I wish he loved me
I wish he could just see

We were meant to be together
Always and forever
The love between him and I
Won't end up being a lie

We would be strong
We would last long
Oh, what we could be
If he could just see

[Chorus]
His breath sounds heavenly
He smiles beautifully
I wish he loved me
I wish he could just see

We were meant to me together
Always and Forever
Oh, what we could be
If he could just see

Does he understand
That our love would be grand?
Does he imagine what we could be?
Does he ever simply see?

I want him to take my hand
And run with me to another land
He is amazing
He is dazzling

[Chorus]
His breath sounds heavenly
He smiles beautifully
I wish he loved me
I wish he could just see

We were meant to be
But, he just doesn't see
What we could be

THE END

Comments

[MiKipPee]

:'(
its beautiful
that is exactly how i feel about Daniel Gardner :'(
bravo bravo
excellent work!!

[Veominjub]

Nice song, I bet he'd like it.

[Dollightful]

pretty nice