- I'm lying in the hospital bed feeling sick as ever. It isn't fair, I'm only twelve, why should I be dying? Is even trying to heal just a pointless endeavor? I'm just fading slowly, I'm about to cry. I will be sad, so sad, if I die. But maybe I can be happy, and leave this endless nightmare. That's to hard to believe, it can't be true. I'll pull the plug. I'll make my dream come true.
- by Maxx Renfew |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/14/2009 |
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- Title: Choosing death
- Artist: Maxx Renfew
- Description: ok. don't think i'm messed up for writing this. it's for my friends sister who is dying. seriously. please don't think i'm a freak. my sister said that. haha. constructive criticism is welcome. and my keyboard's enter keys are broken, so, sorry.
- Date: 01/14/2009
- Tags: life death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Maxx Renfew - 01/15/2009
- thanks smile
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- prettypeach121 - 01/14/2009
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....ur not a freak....
this one is sad(depends how u look at it)
he's in the hospital everyday feeling pain...all he could think of pulling the plug...well,if u were this person in that position,u would want to do that too.to all the people that care should understand that u can't live much longer with the pain u feel everyday,painful & painful untill u can't take it anymore.... - Report As Spam
- breathinginanythingbutair - 01/14/2009
- i think its pretty. you're definitely not a freak.
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- Azrael IIX - 01/14/2009
- maybe you can just at least align the lines but I think it's not bad
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