My friend's poem.

• Artist: iKeke-chan
• Description: This is NOT my poem. My friend had asked me to put her poem on here. So if u have any comments about it, just say it. And I'll tell her! Please be kind!
  Idk if this is even a poem, but bear with me.
  =P And comment please!!
• Date: 01/15/2009
• Tags: friends poem

In my mind, its trapping me. Holding me down in
its pit of darkness. I'm trapped in the water,
which I can't return. I obviously can't swim, but
every time I try, I keep sinking. I felt good
knowing that I had friends that could help pull
me out, but no one ever did. I hate having to know
that if I made one decision, it would make one person happy,
but another sad, and have to hate me. No one gets it,
they're trapped in their own little world of problems,
but no one seems to realize that I'm drowning
trying to make every person in the world
so ******** happy, but yet, I haven't succeded. Every one is still so
angry or depressed. And you know what a kid said to me the other
day?
To go turn around and DIE
Maybe I should've just turned around and died. That would do no good
because that one person would be happy, but everyone else I know
wouldn't. So that brings me back to where we started.
Should I let the water consume me? Or should I fight?

By: Nicole, my closest friend.

Comments

[Levianthan Force]

uh. its nice

[iAcidRainbow]

yay you liked it (this was mine btw)

[Doomed Eva]

i think it great i even agree with it to a surton extent very good sad though has a meaning and thats the kind i like to hear and it sounds like a poem to me