Being alone......

• Artist: II-Dark_Angel_Baby-II
• Description: i was on the streets right where they left me readc the poem and you will understand and please hold your tears!!
• Date: 01/22/2009
• Tags: allalone

i wish you were here with me
showing me the way as i felt for thee
crying and wondering
as if you had forgotten me
i had no hope but to run
as far as i could for the thought
of you ever coming back
i had no home no warmth from your love
the only thing i had was up above
i was only 6 years old
all i had left to do was to
lay down and fold into a ball
and cry myself to sleep
of the thought of being alone makes me weep
crying

Comments

[II-Dark_Angel_Baby-II]

Thank you Rusty. This poem is rather old..Looking back at it reminds me of how my writing needed to be corrected. I've improved greatly. smile

[xRustySporkx]

your a good writer
sad poem sad
5/5