Stars..

• Artist: TheSinisterMuffin
• Description: A poem a thought of while thinking about what was wrong with the world today..
  Would anyone care to give any feedback?
• Date: 01/29/2009
• Tags: stars

If I were a star in the sky
I would not be able to look upon the world today
For all there is, is Hate, Lies and War.
But, if I was a star I couldn't help looking,
Because I would hope that I could see the thing that saves this planet,
Love
Love saves this planet
Many of us just don't realize that yet..

Comments

[Lord Bubbleygirl]

i love it!!! ya this is true, wat ur poem says. 5/5

[Caesura Caelum]

Ah, i see the truth in your words, i knw exactly what you mean... great poem.