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War is Ne'er Kind
Weep not sweet maiden though war is unkind,
Though it leaves many wounded, dead or blind,
Though it breaks heart and soul, leaving only despair,
At least you can be grateful that you are not there.
War is never kind
The cry of a thousand as the battle begins,
Murder will be considered their greatest of sins,
Still they press onward to the frontlines of war,
A bloodlust they feel, like never before.
This is only the beginning
"Stir not my child," a mother sighed,
Your father has gone, most likely he died,
But he died with a reason, he died without fear,
He died knowing the gates of heaven were near.
War is not thine
Triumphant the banner is raised the battle is done,
All men stand together side by side as one,
But what has this won but a victory for naught,
This will only leave more families crying, distraught.
And so it ends
People who's hearts, are rent and torn
People who have gone, to the battlefields to mourn,
All drop a silent tear, for the brave souls who gave their lives here,
Now angels, still heroes, they died without fear.
All others stand down, this war is mine
- Title: War is Ne'er Kind
- Artist: Drizzt104
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Description:
I wrote this for school and I was satisfied with the way it came out, if you go through and read each last line per stanza it makes a short "story" sort of thing too.
Also if you have a family member at war or that has been, comment here and give them props. - Date: 02/03/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Loaf of Toast - 07/17/2009
- Apart from a few missed periods, this piece of work is quite a piece of work. 5/5. You've earned it.
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- RisexWithxthexDead - 02/28/2009
- Oh btw I just love the class you used to write this, very mature, intelligent, and absolutely astonishing no matter how old you may be.
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- Surly animalluver - 02/06/2009
- absolutely,positively, one of the best poems on here. 5/5 of course...i hope to hear more poems from you..
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- Tsunami 0_123 - 02/04/2009
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did you write this because of the struggles your "heart" is going through right now, tho you might not win her heart and all that jazz, you'll still have her memory and what not... lol
it turned out really good... i liked it.. normally i dont roll with poems but i think you got immanuel a run for his money
keeping writing poems i think right now its good for you to express your feelings... and id love to read them too - Report As Spam
- RisexWithxthexDead - 02/03/2009
- OMG Absolutely wonderful! Outstanding! Awesome..:]
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- Drizzt104 - 02/03/2009
- Dang sorry I know I misspelled heroes, I accidentally had a "U" in there.
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