why can't i?

• Artist: vampirekay1
• Description: umm comment me on what you think
• Date: 02/04/2009
• Tags: cant

it seems like i'm out of luck
i feel i'm out of time
turning against the ones i knew
regreating the things i do

why can't i go back
why can't i start anew
every thing i had
i carelessly missed used

let me go back
let me start anew
let me take back the
things i wish i didn't do

i feel so lost
i feel so cunfused
why can't i go back
to the time of my early
youth
the things i've seen
the things i've done
seems to hang over me
like a foul goul
just take me back

Comments

[Renata Of the Volturi]

It's a good poem it flows pretty well. But the spelling isnt great so i gave it a 4 star

[5_Demonic Angel_5]

feeling guilt, everyone does its hard to live with but talking about it helps
it really nice though =]

[Kimono325]

I'm sorry, I can't really look at the poem that well. The lack of capitalization is too distracting. Honey, the shift key is your friend. It's there to help you. I'm sorry, but please, grammar, capitalization, punctuation, spelling, and so on.