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I feel so invisible
Like I'm just an empty hole
All alone, standing here
As if I'm not really there
Wish someone would see me
And stop to just notice me
Wish I wasn't all alone
That there were people who cared
My life has come and gone each year
My birthday arrives then disappears
Yet no one knows
And no one cheers
No one to rejoice with
No one to notice
So I celebrate on my own
'Cuz I'm just that invisible
Look behind me
Walk right by
Trip over me
But I'm just thin air you can't see
No one sees me
No one cares
Groups of friends swarm on by
And I'm just wishing I could belong
- by emeraldpuppy9 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/09/2009 |
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- Title: Invisible
- Artist: emeraldpuppy9
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Description:
just something i wrote one day
comment and rate plz
dont bash too much this is my 1st submit XP
but feel free to tell me ur opinions or advice =] - Date: 02/09/2009
- Tags: invisible friends lonely
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Phinagin2000 - 02/12/2009
- going through the same thing right now razz , i love it! 5/5
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- shadow_of_the_heart19 - 02/12/2009
- great job. i feel like that sometimes too. i think its impossible not to feel like that at least once... but its a great poems. desrives more the 10 pointss......*sighs* im gonna have to settle for 5...
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- RebelSteeler - 02/11/2009
- Aw wow. I think everyone feels that way sometime.
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- emeraldpuppy9 - 02/11/2009
- haha, thnx u guys XD ^^
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- nitsua69 - 02/11/2009
- 110%
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- CupidLuvAngel - 02/11/2009
- a sad poem but io think i is excelent! i give u a106% yea u heard mi! 106%!!!
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- anime_freak_kouga - 02/10/2009
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I think it's really good. I actually submitted a poem about feeling "Invisible", in a way.
Anywho, five stars for you, I like your poem. You did well ^_^ - Report As Spam