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They say I'm godlike,
I think not,
They say I'm beautiful,
I think not,
But one thing they tell me,
I know is true,
It comes from the heart,
I break those hearts they tell me,
That is true,
But not what the real truth is,
When your gone,
I'm invincible,
But when your here,
I break down,
I am immortal when your not here,
I am human when your here,
People tell me I'm,
Invincible,
I tell them no I'm not,
They think I lie when I say that,
But now they know,
Everything that he does,
It reminds me of you,
We were meant for each other,
You used to tell me that,
And I believed it,
But now I know,
Your mask is gone,
You tried to take away my invincibility,
Now you know,
I am Invincible!
You used to think I was a child,
But now I'm all grown up,
I don't believe your stupid lies anymore,
Because now,
I am invincible again.
- by iStab Crayons |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/13/2009 |
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- Title: Invincible
- Artist: iStab Crayons
- Description: A poem I thought of while reading poems and books....It took me a while to figure it all out....Comment appreciated...PM me if you have any questions or want me to comment/read/rate your poems or other things...
- Date: 02/13/2009
- Tags: invincible
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Kibroth - 02/15/2009
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I like what you were trying to say, but the execution was a little redundant. With a little work though, it has some serious potential.
If you'd like a more specific critique, send me a PM.
No matter what, keep writing! 3/5
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- Steph-x-Chain - 02/14/2009
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wow, nice poem smile
mind checking out mines sometime? - Report As Spam
- tjmonsta - 02/13/2009
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good.like it
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