Unwanted

• Artist: Dj BoxHeart
• Description: This is the first song I've ever written and I've gotten alot of comments on it at school so I hope you like it too (plz comment on this and my other work, I'd appreciate it :3)
• Date: 02/19/2009
• Tags: unwanted

Life is a b***h sometimes but everybodys gotta try to get by.
But it's hard for me since I'm one of those people who can't;
get any friends
score a girlfriend
get an A+ since I'm f*ckin' retarded.
All my my life I have failed, since I'm;

Unwanted, forgotten, the world feels like it's haunted.
Mistaken, heart broken, I'm just a ghost in this wasteland.

This world seems so unfair it feels like I'm the only one that's ever here.
All I wish to do is die since everybody thinks I'm bi.
As I sit here waiting for you, I hear all the emos rue
the day they were born into the world as I do too.
As I sit here I die slowly, as the pain slowly engulfs me,
I lie down in distress and think about how all I am is;

Unwanted, forgotten, the world feels like it's haunted.
Mistaken, heart broken, I'm just a ghost in this wasteland.
All I do is waste away as missery has come to stay.
So I've decided I will stay here; wasting away...

(solo)

(Unwanted, forgotten, this place feels like it's haunted.
Mistaken, heart broken...)

Unwanted, forgotten, the world feels like it's haunted.
Mistaken, heart broken, I'm just a ghost in this wasteland.
All I do is waste away as missery has come to stay.
So I've decided I will stay here; wasting away...
wasting away(Unwanted, unwanted, unwanted)wasting away
(Unwanted, unwanted, unwanted)nobody wants me,
So I'll just waste away.

Comments

[xXxLoveHugsDrugsxXx]

wow!! I like it!! just by reading it I already have a tune in my head for it!! You did an excellent job!! biggrin come and read my lyrics!!

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

This was quite terrible. The language is boring, the imagery is weak, the ideas are bland and uninteresting, not to mention weakly implemented, shallow, and unoriginal. The wordplay is absent, the colloquial nature of the work is abysmal, and it is needlessly raw. 1/5.

[Namaste Neko-chan]

Good but you should put the tunes and stuff in if it is a song so people know how to sing it ya know???