Trying

• Artist: -MoonlightDiva_1-
• Description: I lost Someone that i was trying to get back
  but then it hit me........................................................... i was the only one trying
• Date: 02/21/2009
• Tags: trying

loving someone takes a hole lot of trying
you try your best to make 'em happy smile
you try your best to stop their tears crying
you try your best to keep 'em safe ninja
you try your best to give them as much of your time as possible
yet you fail. stressed
then you realize at the end of it all you were the only one TRYING!!!!!!!! confused

Comments

[Fiona La Poete]

There were a few spelling mistakes.
The smiley faces make it look really immature.
It has no flow at all.
And the end of it was kind of... weird.

[mezuku]

I really like it 5/5!!!

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Repetitive, boring, and unoriginal. Fairly weak and devoid of any sort of interesting imagery or wording. So very bare bones and simplistic.

[babysweetness1]

thats good add more to it