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She walks alone
Tears stream down her face
Nobody wants to look her way
She walks alone
With no hand to hold
No arms to hold her close
She walks alone
Down a lonely path
Holding in so much pain
She walks alone
An outsider to most
Not accepted anywhere, any way
She lies alone
Having taken her own life
And not a soul has visited her grave.
- by Natara_Pika |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/21/2009 |
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- Title: She Walks Alone
- Artist: Natara_Pika
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Description:
A poem about a girl who is constantly bullied and excluded until she is driven to kill herself. Even when she does this, not a single person cares. Sorry if it's too depressing.
Also if you rate low please tell why cause I really wanna improve :P - Date: 02/21/2009
- Tags: walks alone suicide depression
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Comments (5 Comments)
- TheDarkArtist - 04/22/2009
- Impressing, depressing, almost completly true... what can I say that hasn't been said before? Good job
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- MoogieDancer - 04/11/2009
- i gave it a 5/5. its good but ur right it is kinda depressing
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- ArchitaMidnightFur - 02/23/2009
- this is very impressing.... definately 5/5
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- Punkette92 - 02/21/2009
- this is really good ... 5/5 totaly... & now one of my favs!!!!!!!
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- hatman69 - 02/21/2009
- wow. really good.
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