Sad Love Sonnet

• Artist: 3x24
• Description: A sad love sonnet that I wrote one day.
  
  Hope you like it, please comment! ^-^
• Date: 02/28/2009
• Tags: love sonnet

I sit on these no name streets wondering
if I would be greater than whom I see
I bitterly sit on the curb crying
and hate how people give me sympathy
I watch the others smile happily
with the ones that they will love forever
watching this love they have to eagerly
I want to be with you but shall never
I wish for you to love me like they do
the people stare like i'm some kind of fool
knowing that I have to do without you
thinking about us together is cruel
I desire and crave your love today
I wouldn't want it any other way...

Comments

[3x24]

a sonnet is a poem with 14 lines, and a abab cdcd efef gg format

[Louanne Lain]

Love iut. Actually it reminds me of me...hm...Anyway, good job. Keep writing.

[xretarded_muffinsx]

i had to read it three times. it was soo great.
yu did very well. and yu used alliteration very
well. soo good job! keep it up.

[xx_im_emo_ru_xx]

it waz awsome i loved it///////// but wats a sonnet?......................lol