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"The Midnight Blossom"
The iris it is a gorgeous flower. White as new snow and just as soft. Thou hath never seen such beauty in a flower then this one microscopic blossom. If thou art a raven haired lady thou woulds't most surely increase thy beauty with it in thy hair. The fairest bouquet of roses would be greatly shamed by the Iris's heavenly blossom. As well as their scent it is more beautiful and fragrant than a morning by a pristine brook surrounded by trees and lovely water lillies.
- by Deshi_Venshin594 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/05/2009 |
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- Title: "The Midnight Blossom"
- Artist: Deshi_Venshin594
- Description: Please comment if you like it or have suggestions.
- Date: 03/05/2009
- Tags: midnight blossom
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Zalzie - 03/08/2009
- hmm, not bad- i think the language that you used was appropriate here ^^ It also flows nicely
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- Deshi_Venshin594 - 03/07/2009
- Sorry i like to write in archaic english it flows much better in my opinion
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- Silently_Die_By_You - 03/06/2009
- ok, can u say "shakespeare?" wow. i could barely understand that
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- Daddy Got This Account - 03/06/2009
- i meant to put "down" my bad. ^^"
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- Daddy Got This Account - 03/05/2009
- ok, this is a very beautiful piece of poetry. if anyone comments negativly i will hunt you dont and kill you. (mabye) i will on gaia, so, only nice comments will be allowed!
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