The Outside

• Artist: AznxKitty
• Description: I was walking outside and looking around and decided to write a poem about what I saw.Please tell me what you think.;D
• Date: 03/07/2009
• Tags: outside

I see trees that reminds me of a deep green forest
The sun as bright and warm as can be
Sand that reminds me of walking on the beach
Birds that sing their beautiful melodies
Cherry blossom trees that have the most beautiful pink blossoms
A dog that reminds me how loyal animals can be
Basketballs dribbling that reminds me of music
And the winter wind that reminds me how pure the world can be

Comments

[oX-silent-rose-Xo]

i agree with Mira! great job! this really expresses how beautiful our surroundings are. 5/5

[Nyolia]

Very descriptive! biggrin