never enough

• Artist: Xx_I R4p3-L30
• Description: a poem i wrote after a bad break up...
• Date: 03/09/2009
• Tags: never enough

the heart is never enough for a player
the soal is never enought for a vampire
the body is never gonna cut it down for a monster!

i kept holding on for more than i should have
but now im afraid its too late
too say the sorry's
the 'i love u's
because when i let go, its done

for all those things i expected of u
and everything ive done to try to make u a beter person
but then i relize u can never truly change a person

i though i was in love
but i was wrong
to bealive u
all those things u said
all lies
but now ill walk away from u
and never let u in again

Comments

[Slinkenhofer]

Maybe it's partly due to your atrocious spelling, but the first stanza turned me off to the whole poem. Not only was it cliche and overdone, but it was disjointed to the point that I could barely understand what it was trying to say until I read the rest of the poem (which frankly, wasn't much better. I have to keep this under 500 characters, so I'll just say this: 1/5 for being something you clearly didn't take any time or effort on.

[Jamjimster99]

nice poem and I can sense a lot of heart from the writer. I hope you do more!!! God Bless!!

[tampico-chan]

i think th poem is really good! it would be award worthy if you spelled out all the "u"s though. spelling out us makes it sound more meaningful. good job!

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