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You're the one who made my life enchanted
That's why expect me to never take you for granted
You make me feel safe from harm
That's why I feel myself so warm
You'll always be the best for me
'Coz I know we're meant to be
Without you, my life will be a history
And bring sorrow to me filled with misery
You made me change my attitude
That's why I give you my gratitude
You're the one who made my life so bright
And brought my darkest way a light
You'll always be here in my heart
'Coz we've shared a lot from the start
My love for you grows each day farther
But please don't make a way for me to miss you further
You're someone who's difficult to find
'Coz this I tell you "you're one of a kind"
You're someone I'll remember forever
'Coz in my heart we'll always be together.
- by certfydTSfan-vampire |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/24/2009 |
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- Title: You
- Artist: certfydTSfan-vampire
- Description: read it. please comment, too. By the way, I'm just 12 so don't expect much from me.. I just wanna share this thought. Rate, don't hate.. xD
- Date: 03/24/2009
- Tags: story love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Free_to_Dream - 03/27/2009
- Finally! A good happy poem!! 5/5
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- Dumasaphob - 03/27/2009
- great work 5/5
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- Jaime Cullen - 03/26/2009
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YOU'RE ONLY 12!?
I really liked it, there's not many things I can be bothered to read
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- true_sin - 03/25/2009
- Ok a comment this will be sarrow and misery are nearly, if not the same thing. Your structure is lacking a little, and yet it is impressive for your age. Good work, I wont rate this but I will tell you this one thing. Work hard at your writing skills, develope a wide vocabulary and you my dear will go far. As I said good work.
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