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Life's too simple
That's for the inexperienced
And others who probably can't feel this
They want our position, they want out of their strife
And reborn into a new life
But they can't have it, some of them can't reach it
Some of them can't try, and others didn't make it
So now they're trying to teach it
Yes ma', I got an A in my School of Performing Arts
And now I'm on standby getting a head start
No man's land is where I live
So no robbing of my style and nothing to give
In the middle of all this, I'ma try a little harder
So my music one day will travel a little farther
And go international, if my lyrics can make it
And hopefully those people will take it
KiD CuDi already made it, what he believed he stated
that "The ones that make it complicated...
Never get congratulated"
Continuing this race, I'ma hit first place
And reward myself with a year's full of grace
And my next success, a year after that
Until I can no longer count up my stacks
You see, life isn't hard if you stay away from dime's
Just be "simple in the mind...
And everything will be fine"
Stay away from the bling, better yet get a ring
Get a wife and some kids, then grow a few wings
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Comments (7 Comments)
- conflicting actor - 09/20/2009
- I agree with Klaora
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- mr_grandma - 09/01/2009
- not bad
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- XxTiMaZinGXx - 08/10/2009
- dude thats nice the people that say its ok i wanna see them better
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- misschrissy_94 - 08/06/2009
- not bad its ok
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- unfaithfulVampire - 07/24/2009
- not bad
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- Kira Shiann - 07/17/2009
- I liked how your rhyme ended in a story. Often people get to the end and rhyme something random because its what rhymes im glad you didnt do that.
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- Klaora - 06/24/2009
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Slow to start, but, man, it just took off after that. I was rather surprised that it ended so quickly. It flows so well. You wrapped it up very well.
A few punctuation and other small errors, but it doesn't detract too much. Please, keep up the good work and keep trying hard. I see something very great. A diamond in the rough. - Report As Spam