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Take my spirit.
Steal my love.
For you cannot,
Erase this stain.
Leave me standing,
Cold and damp,
All by myself,
In pouring rain.
Leave me father,
Mother too.
Goodbye ones,
That I love dear.
So long brothers,
Sisters, friends,
And family,
Who I hold near.
Everyone,
Who I have loved,
Built memories,
Throughout the years,
Disappear.
And leave me here.
- by xXxAmericanCheeseOmletxXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/11/2009 |
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- Title: ABANDONED
- Artist: xXxAmericanCheeseOmletxXx
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Description:
Hey, this is probably my third poem done outside of school (aka out of my free will) so i'm not a very experienced poet. please no overly negative or insulting comments. i appreciate high ratings and good critisizm. I HEART COMMENTS! IT MAKES ME FEEL GOOD TO KNOW PEOPLE ARE READING MY WORK! i may have misspelled somthing so please bring that to my attention. Thank you for taking the time to review my work and hopefully rating it high.
P.S. i am not emo nor clinically depressed. - Date: 04/11/2009
- Tags: abandoned lonely alone loss family
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- xXxAmericanCheeseOmletxXx - 04/18/2009
- SOMEONE PLEEZ COMMENT!!!
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- bellacosa67 - 04/12/2009
- Ok that is a little depressing, lol. It's very good though. You should be a poet when you grow up!
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