Dear God

• Artist: Plain Old cat
• Description: One of many poems i've written. A personal favorite.
• Date: 04/15/2009
• Tags: dear

How's Dad?
I miss him so much.
Mommies been sad,
without his touch.
She cries every night,
and doesn't know i hear.
So i pray with all my might,
she just wants him near.
I don't have a lot,
a piggy bank on the wall.
It's all i've got,
but you can have it all.
She just wants Daddy back,
and i miss him too.
Does he have to pack?
Will he come with you?
Does he remember me?
Well, that's all i've got to say,
thanks for listening to me.
Every night i pray.

Comments

[DarkHearts_Angel]

very good i have my personal story to go with it though

[bindyblueeyes]

this is nice
a little depressing
but,

i like it
it sounds like its told from the point
of view of a young child

and it holds its innocence