-
One night when i woke up
from a scary dream
a man was in my doorway
his coat was opened wide
and knifes were all over the inside
in one space on his jacket
a thread was sticking out
slowly he walked toward me and held out his hand
the thread started to unravel
stealthily he reached into his pocket to pull out a bloody knife
and the thread kept unraveling
another step he took toward me
the knife held up high
by now he was near me just so i could touch him
the thread unraveled quicker now
and quicker and quicker
until there was no more off this strange man
just an old torn up sweater
i ran into my mommy's room
and told her of this man
she laughed and rubbed my shoulder
said, "honey, its ok."
"But what off the creepy man" i say
she smiles and pulls me closer
"he's gone now, hun. go to sleep."
so i walk back to my room and close the door real tight
the man is sitting on my bed
with my teddy bear in his hand
there's something wrong with my stuffed teddy
its head is there no more
i look at the man in horror
and screamed with all my might
but my door let no sound through to my mom
for i had shut it tight and hard
the man smiles and waves me closer
what can i do i have to go
when i reach him he hugs me
"aren't you going to kill me" i say
he just smiles and rubs my shoulder
just like mommy
- by Sergeant smileyface |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/24/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: rub my shoulder
- Artist: Sergeant smileyface
-
Description:
i was bored so i wrote something. kinda weird but... who cares?
and... the title sucks, i know, i know i couldn't think of one. it kinda works though, right? - Date: 04/24/2009
- Tags: nightmares night knife
- Report Post
Comments (5 Comments)
- Nycholas Flamel - 08/05/2009
- It's very creepy, I must admit. And the last line breaks the flow, leaving the reader with a feeling of unease. If it were intentional, it is pure genius! 5/5
- Report As Spam
- toxic_vamp32 - 05/30/2009
- its good....but kinda creepy.
- Report As Spam
- yasmineurgurl - 04/26/2009
- WOW SORT OF CREEPY BUT AWESOME
- Report As Spam
- vampiress_of_the_dark - 04/25/2009
- i agree
- Report As Spam
- CrystaledRosePetal - 04/24/2009
-
ahh creepy... kinda.
But I like it. - Report As Spam