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This poem is for you,
Because you are my stars,
My air,
My sun,
Even my sea,
When I see you my heart rushes,
And my vision becomes clear,
Seeing you walking towards me,
Makes me feel special,
Unique,
Loved,
And genuine,
My heart pounds,
My breath catches,
My back shivers,
You are my love.
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- by Holypandas |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/27/2009 |
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- Title: My Love
- Artist: Holypandas
- Description: A simple love poem I wrote a while ago.
- Date: 04/27/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Holypandas - 05/30/2009
- Thanks.
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- Lunacy Fr1nge - 05/29/2009
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You wrote: "When is see you my heart rushes"
Correction: "When I see you my heart rushes - Report As Spam
- Cat of Ice - 04/28/2009
- its okay. i think you should make it rimin and it would be perfect.
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- Earthsongs - 04/27/2009
- Not bad. I like the transition from the emotion to the physicality of love.
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