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two black circles
that's all I see
I stare at her
she stares back at me...
and then my words are tumbling
and her words are stumbling
I give in to mumbling
as she then is fumbling...
to wipe away the tears
I wish I could cover my ears...
to block out her cries
as tears stream from her eyes
she starts asking whys
and to my surprise,
I turn to lies...
what a demise!
at first, she seemed alright
but she called on me near twilight
she thought she might make it right,
but she could never understand my plight!
again she asked me all her whys
I repeated all my lies
I wonder if it was wise
to go and break off all our ties
because she won't ever understand
I will never take her by the hand
now, for her I will not stand
get her out of my life, I demand!
though she is there everday,
shestays quite out of my way
but for now we are at bay
while I watch things come into play
we'll never again be together
I have a hatred now and forever
I am held fast as if by a tether
but I'll never love her, never ever!
two black circles
watching everyday
watching, waiting
as if I were their prey
- by Opalescent_violet_14 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/01/2009 |
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- Title: no title
- Artist: Opalescent_violet_14
- Description: ummm...well this is a poem from a guy's perspective and it's kinda based on one of my experiences but... i don't know. enjoy or don't. everyone has an opinion. whatever. just rate it please. =/
- Date: 05/01/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- RainbowRebel_x - 05/31/2009
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Hey, I Really Enjoyed Reading This. Like YAY Said It's Sounds Like A Sad Poem But It's Your Perspective Of Love Or Something, Isnt It?
I Give It 10,000/10 =D. It Really Was Amazing <3 - Report As Spam
- YAYrunrunrunoops - 05/03/2009
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heyyyyyy dude! Do you wanna be a poet when youre older? because you should do something with writing
I LOVE IT!
it must have been very hard to write with all that rhyme, and the syllable scheme. Its sounds like a sad poem, i really love how you go back to the beginning when you end, with the two black circles. You know, you could actually make this into a song. are you musical also? good job! 500/5 - Report As Spam
- Opalescent_violet_14 - 05/02/2009
- ummm.. if you rate can you please comment because i want your opinion other than a number ^-^ thnx.
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- thrivingtoexist - 05/01/2009
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that...is simply amazing
very well done 10/10 5 stars! - Report As Spam
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