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I sit alone
The chaos around me ensues
The class transforms
Into a Los Vegas casino
Go Fish beside me
Poker across the room
I sit alone
Separate from the crowd
Away from all the people
If only we were together
I might not be this way
I miss him
I love him
We are alone together
yet separated
Despite my metaphors,
I still sit alone
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- Title: Sitting Alone
- Artist: emoly01
- Description: I felt like writing today in class. I felt separate and nobody took notice of me. I didn't mind; I almost enjoyed it. I just wanted my boyfriend next to me and that made me feel lonely. (I miss you, James.)
- Date: 05/07/2009
- Tags: sitting alone
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Creas - 05/27/2009
- Your writing is good. I can't think of a thing to critique.
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- vampirexdemon - 05/13/2009
- Yes, I agree, there's something missing, but besides that, it was a good poem, and emotional, too.
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- myjames - 05/08/2009
- Well, it was emotional, certainly but it lacked something... I'm not sure what.
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