fallen angel

• Artist: deaths_moon_light
• Description:
• Date: 05/19/2009
• Tags: fallen angel

a fallen angel from the sky,
away far from home,
with a broken heart and a lonly soul
i want to return home.

Comments

[Crimson Scarlethe]

Hey, you're good!
Short yet meaningful!
There's just too much sadness one can see.
And with few lines, you manage to show it's essence.
This poem of yours, make readers such as I, empathize your melancholic heart.

Fix some spelling though 4laugh
3rd line arrow "lonely" xd

Damn. This AOK_DA_BOMB has a gigantic head full of nothing but brags. Tsktsk. Now, him, I pity. blaugh

[Original Caviel]

RUBBISH 1/5

by the way my house is better than yours the SILVER chair is the main seat its meant to stand out you lonely noob