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Teacher said, “You don’t obey.
You fidget and twidget
And you won’t sit down.
So go stand in the corner now
‘Til I say you can turn around.”
So there I stood ‘til it got dark
Without a whimper or a tear,
‘Til everybody else went home.
I guess that she forgot me here.
And that was Friday, so I stayed
All through the weekend-bein’ good,
And Monday was the first day of
Summer vacation, so I stood
Through hot July and sticky August,
Tryin’ to obey her rule.
Stood right there until September,
When-yikes-they closed down the school!
Boarded up the doors and windows,
Moved to a new one way ‘cross town.
So here I’ve stood for forty years
In dark and dust and creaky sounds,
Waiting for her to say, “Turn around.”
This might not be just what she meant,
But me-I’m so obedient.
Thank you all!~
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- by iiDeadWoman |
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- | Submitted on 05/22/2009 |
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- Title: Obedient
- Artist: iiDeadWoman
- Description: I worked on this poem for 3 months, and now it is my time to sumbit it. Please, vote and comment!!!~~~
- Date: 05/22/2009
- Tags: obedient
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- x-iSamiie - 10/10/2009
- yo wasup hope biggrin stupid math homework sucks wink
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- angelcat1793 - 06/11/2009
- wow awsome
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- Zombiee Nerd - 06/02/2009
- this is mine blowing awesome and joyful
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- XibLaCkOuTzZx - 05/27/2009
- nice good job... ^^
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