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"Consumed by Choice"
Sequel to "Taken by Trance" by: Onyxdragonflyy
and yet for love pay any price
too soon our dreams a sacrifice
still we bleed and beg for love
to be wrapped in it like hand to glove
a safety that leaks and tears
how quick we are to seal with cares
when glasses break we collect the shards
with good intent and finger split we guard
those little rose slivers to hide the lies
are glued back together with painfilled cries
the cries, the lies, the hope, the fear
all the same we sacrifice, for love a single tear
and yet for love pay any price
too soon becomes a willing sacrifice
~END~
4laugh Thanks so much for reading! Please not the lack of punctuation was purposely left out. If this confuses you when reading...sorry. Please leave a comment of any kind to let me know what you thought.
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- by Dragons Willow |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/04/2009 |
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- Title: Consumed by Choice
- Artist: Dragons Willow
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This is a sequel to "Taken by Trance" by: Onyxdragonflyy, a best friend of mine. "Consumed by Choice stands alone, but if you want to read the first:
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2252922/1/Taken_by_Trance
"Consumed by Choice" is an ode to love and all of its woes. - Date: 06/04/2009
- Tags: consumed choice
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xXx suicidal_skittles xXx - 03/15/2011
- I really like this! Very good, I like how it flows. Im gonna read the first part.
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- DeathLies - 06/13/2009
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Awesome.
Can relate, guess everyone can, things just fall appart sometimes. - Report As Spam
- PikaPowerx3 - 06/11/2009
- I like this one too. Ima read the first part now =]
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- amysodin - 06/09/2009
- nice smile
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- -I- Broken Butterfly -I- - 06/05/2009
- very good..-^.^-
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