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"Tears help heal the pain."
She said,
Yet she's shivering like it's cold.
It's warm in the south,
At this time or year,
Yet she sleeps in the ashes again.
And on her angel bone,
There are scars,
From when she flew too near the sun.
Burst of light, of flames, of fire,
She is like Icarus,
Watching her fall home again.
In the dust of ember's wake,
She opened her eyes,
There were feathers on her back.
Without a word of thanks,
She spread her wings and flew,
As if she knew,
She would always rise again,
Leaving a trail of ash.
P h o e n i x.
- Title: Phoenix
- Artist: Sunafire
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Description:
I don't have to explain this one.
The first sentance is relating to the fact that Pheonix Tears supposedly have healing qualities.
And the rest is about the fact that when they die they burst into flame, and are reborn from the ashes.
Comments & Criticism appreciated :) - Date: 06/06/2009
- Tags: phoenix ashes wings feathers fire
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Comments (4 Comments)
- MochikoMaid - 07/30/2010
- I have often thought of the pheonix as a simbole of love,power,and blessing,but they are also beautiful things to look at!I love the writing if people finally see this it will spark fame!
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- is that a bear - 03/01/2010
- wow. this is amazing and i reserve that word for only the best. please keep writing. and read mine and comment if you please.
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- Sunafire - 06/07/2009
- There are many 'myths' concerning The Pheonix. I was more basing this on the Harry Potter version smile
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- Airbud_Cyclone - 06/06/2009
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Phoenix sometimes symbolized love.. yet its ashes can't go back to life if its ashes will be shred to lake of tretchery...
-(Alenient Fang Lacour)
please have some comments too...
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101388835#title
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