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The rose continues to
Shine.
Its red petals
Shimmers under the Sun's continuous
Warmth.
Its beauty,
Undescribed,
But admired by all.
Soon,
Very soon,
Its colors die.
Those petals fall
One
By
One
Gliding across the gracefull wind.
What has become of this rose
Now?
- by s u n n y _ l o t u s |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/06/2009 |
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- Title: Radiance
- Artist: s u n n y _ l o t u s
- Description: I was suddenly inspired to write this poem when I was looking at a rose. I made a few changes and this is a free verse poem. Sorry if it's a bit long. Hope you like it! :3
- Date: 06/06/2009
- Tags: radiance
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Comments (7 Comments)
- s u n n y _ l o t u s - 07/30/2009
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Awwww...I appreciate everyone's comment! ^.^
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- Colorfull_Lollipop - 07/26/2009
- Nice poem! n_n
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- xStrange xOne - 07/23/2009
- Pretty!
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- Meli Milk - 07/06/2009
- It's a little awkward but elegant. Rate and comment back PLEASE! ^^
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- tehmagicalboxfairy - 06/25/2009
- lovely 5/5 ^.^
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- Angelic Love Singer - 06/22/2009
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THE WORD BREAKS R 4 FREE VERSE
BTW it's not akward! it's Poetry^^
FREE VERSE: it's means you can do any meter and/or rhyme
OK? anymore questions, please feel free to look it up in the dictionary^^
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- Angelic Love Singer - 06/22/2009
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KYA I remember this poem from DC! it touching^^
* I like the original better *
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