Ode to the Risen

• Artist: Alexzan
• Description: Here is my first Ode to something. I hope everyone likes it. Again, feel free to Rate/Comment. I really appreciate it.
• Date: 06/06/2009
• Tags: risen

Ode to the risen waters
For they have given life to many

Ode to the angels
For they bask before us in our own humility
While continuing to serve
And give

Ode to the children
Who will someday lead our world
Through the memories and experience
That their guardians provided

Ode to the born
That they may see
The world in innocence
And show us a new light

Ode to new love
That the never-ending melody
Will never cease to
Play and
Be heard
And inspire
The love that we all share

Comments

[Orio11]

That's lovely! I like it a lot. But I'm confused about what you mean by Ode. Usually an Ode is something like this:

Ode to Popcorn
Pop it goes,
bursting into existance
........... Etc.

The Ode to Blah Blah Blah is the title, but is not mentioned in the body. Unless this is more than one poem in one entry.... Hmmm..

But lovely writing! I'm excited to read more in a second.

[mistressandmaster]

i like the grasp that you had on my intrige
5/5