Heart attack

• Artist: iiFapOutLoud
• Description: I made up this poem last night around 3 in the morning. Tell me what you think. First poem posting on here, hope you all enjoy. =3
• Date: 06/16/2009
• Tags: heart attack

Heart attack
You promised forever...
I gave you my heart...
But why'd you have to break it, and tear us apart...
You say it was for us...
I say it's all for you...
Why'd you have to make my life turn black and blue...
You made me smile when I was down...
But now all I can do is cry and frown...
Every day of every week...
I fake a smile so you can sleep...
But if you cared, and loved me true...
You'd feel what I was going through...
I feel so empty, so out of place...
Wishing you could fill me, with your tender embrace...
As days get longer, and nights get harder...
I wish our love, would quit falling farther...
I really love you and want you back...
To help break me from this heart attack...

Comments

[Rogelio-CP_64]

Wow.... One of very few that r able to touch someone so deep. My stuff is not this good so I'm going to favorite it smile . Honestly I know what ur feeling. I was just never able to express it in the correct way... U were. Congrats. Oh and I write at that time too smile

[MIGITLOVE14]

wow thats beautiful
thats exactly how i feel everyday no joke

[TenderTots]

i luffles it >3
541584545540000000000/5
if only...
5/5 >3