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Her eyes are like blue swimming pools,
and you want to swim inside,
they've held water over years,
because she's always cried.
Pull her close and hold her near,
take away her pain and fear.
In the darkness of the night,
be her beacon, shine your light.
Take her hand and lead the way,
tell her all you want to say.
Whisper softly in her ear,
all those things she want to hear.
Enter her heart,
break down the wall.
It's time for her,
to watch it fall.
She's been a prisoner,
can't you see?
Break her chains,
and set her free.
You brought back her heart, whispered: 'I love you.'
And now she knows, now she completely fell for you!
- by Ayame Akoto |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/24/2009 |
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- Title: Set Her Free
- Artist: Ayame Akoto
- Description: I wrote this poem recently because I just lost my daddy in Jan. and this is how I have felt!
- Date: 07/24/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- from my hands - 08/04/2009
- This is good. It reminds me of Ocean Eyes, a nickname given to the mother of a dead child, in the book The Lovely Bones, by Alice Sebold. You should check it out smile
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- Dreams-of-Claudia - 07/26/2009
- This is very good. It's relatable on different levels. From reading it, I got the feeling of falling in love, rather than just loosing a loved one. I like how versitile it is.
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- XxcarlehhxX - 07/24/2009
- beautiful! i love this! but i'm not sure i like the last line. it doesn't flow as much with the rest. but other then that, very nice :]
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