Black Dove

• Artist: Mitsuki_Amaya
• Description: I like writing stories and this is a poem I'm planning to include at the end of it. The title of the book is also called Black Dove and is about a girl whose lover died while protecting his brother. A friend of mine actually started the poem and I completed it. Enjoy!
• Date: 08/01/2009
• Tags: black dove

As the black dove soars through the night
I lift my spirits I lift them high
But as that dove is then shot down
I watch my hopes crash to the ground

What was alive is now no more
I watched it close, that one last door
His voice now would be unheard of
The one i feared that I had loved

But he did teach to me one thought
"Do not give up before you've fought
Even if you will eternally lie
For through love even death may die."

Comments

[-CarelessMemories-]

Brilliant. The last stanza is my favourite smile

[Honey_Luvs_Yew]

yay I love it.
Very deep.
5/5

[Mitsuki_Amaya]

Tear tear, no one's commenting... oh well, i guess that takes time!