A movie, a Scene

• Artist: Lbdoodle
• Description: WOOT
  okays, think this one is pretty good, kinda, id like to think so
  id like to hope so....i just got anouther idea for anouther poem....fo sho
• Date: 08/20/2009
• Tags: movie scene

u imatate a man
and try to hold my hand
i pull away
and u refuse to stay
i never said i was pretty
i never said i was slim
but the lines u gave me were witty
and u forced me to love him
now on to the scene
were the guy gets the girl
the type of scene
that puts my mind in a whirl
the kiss then they fight
then they stay together all night
the next part is boring
how the others are so adoring
i seem to choke up
by the the lives they force up
then heres the point
were u act it all out
we do the great kiss
then we scream and we shout
my friends stroke me with lust
if u will if they must
they say u did great
it must have been fate
then it all falls apart
im not use to this scene
and of course it restarts
i hearcoos
i hear screams
im unsure now
of exactly what i should do
u hold out your hand
i take it this time
u tell me u love me
and then life is just fine

Comments

[Sesskogaru]

Sounds good. biggrin

[ProfessorKC]

spell check ... might help unless this was purposeful in making the poem unreadable in spots ... I don't know. Everything anyone writes is a learning experience and you always improve in some way ... the point is to keep doing it.