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“Without pain, love would not exist.”
Words uttered softly from sullen lips.
“We wait and watch, hidden in mist.”
Pain wrapped around the aching heart.
“He‘ll never realize his sudden luck.”
Words uttered softly from sullen lips.
“She’ll never guess he’s such a schmuck”
Pain wound around the aching heart.
“Her figure dances through my mind.”
Words uttered softly from sullen lips.
“She makes me wish my eyes were blind.”
Pain coiled around the aching heart.
"The cold soulless nights, the ones I hide"
Words uttered softly from sullen lips.
“I feel as if my love has died.”
Pain curled around the dying heart.
- by Sinful Fool |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/31/2009 |
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- Title: Ballad attempt #1
- Artist: Sinful Fool
- Description: This is a ballad I have to write for English class. If anyone has comments, please PM me only with constructive criticism. If it's to tell me how bad it sucks, then don't even bother PMing. I already know.
- Date: 08/31/2009
- Tags: ballad
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Comments (3 Comments)
- fruit4you - 09/30/2014
- Why are there quotation marks? You don't need them. But mostly the ballad is good.
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- seizethemoment - 08/31/2009
- I wish I could write something like that.
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- Failure and Disfunction - 08/31/2009
- Hey, I thinkk Its good
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