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A beautiful sight
as the playful wind blows with might
I saw it, it's white
there's no time to think
nor is there a moment to blink
cute and frilly pink
you don't have a clue
I'm always thinking about you
elegance of blue
can't help but to frown
you are the new talk in our town
there's a stain of brown *rofl*
- by Uncle Marko |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/15/2009 |
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- Title: White Haiku
- Artist: Uncle Marko
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Description:
this is not a pun
an event witnessed by the sun
haiku made for fun
I hope you enjoy my poems :)) - Date: 09/15/2009
- Tags: white haiku
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Comments (3 Comments)
- MalevolentChocolate - 12/24/2009
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hmm... the second line of each of your paragraphs are a bit too many syllables.
otherwise, good (though i didn't get the last line) - Report As Spam
- oxygeNATION - 09/22/2009
- Haha! Cute!
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- Deadlylight6 - 09/19/2009
- the rhythm is 5-7-5 not 5-8-5, but in all these are good
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