The Way You....

• Artist: Poisonous Desire
• Description: this poem is really random and i think its not good really. i mean i was listening to this song and it got me motivated to write this poem.wrote this couple of months ago..
• Date: 11/03/2009
• Tags: lovecrazyfeelings

The way you smile makes my heart raise
Its like i don't know how to pace, faster
the way you smooth talk to me
makes me feel like i cant breath
cant you see..

The things you say to me, was it all true?
I'm falling over you.
I want you to stay
don't want you to go away.

The way you made my cheeks red
its all going crazy inside my head
this is all a dream
at least that's what i think it seems.

Comments

[werty_werty_werty]

maybe if you madde every other line rhyme like this"
The way you made my cheeks red
i thought this is all a dream
its all going crazy inside my head
at least that's what it seems.

.... just a suggestion...

[Isolated Spirit]

its rhymes atleast.=)