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Mother ill be fine.
I promise i'm okay.
Don't insist on being there.
Every second of each day.
I know what to expect.
Your presence will not mean a thing.
She sat down at the desk.
He look at her and said.
The words that stopped her sleeping.
Running over in her head.
Your cancer has spread.
You don't have long left.
There are things we could do.
To make it comfortable for you.
She turned to her mother.
Who was sitting by her side.
She said Mother please don't leave me.
I'm not ok, i lied.
The doctor looked confused.
My dear, who are you talking to?
She pointed and then paused.
What am i doing this for..?
You will not see my mother.
She is only seen by me.
She is with me everywhere.
She never ever leaves.
She'l be with me when i die.
She'l be waiting there for me.
Doctor, its ok,.
You can't do anything for me.
Months later, in a hospital.
She lay fragile and weak.
Slowly coming to the end of it all.
As she struggled to try and speak.
Mother, i don't feel fine.
I'm really not okay.
Please promise me your'll be there.
Every second of each day.
And when my time comes to be..
Called back home by God.
Please hold me hand and lead the way.
Don't let me get lost.
I need you to understand..
They did everything they could.
Just like they did when you had to suffer.
Longer than any one should.
So i'll close my eyes..
Just like i'm sleeping...
Wake me when were there.
To a place where i can be with you.
In a world that has no pain.
- by Daddy Got This Account |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/14/2009 |
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- Title: I'll Close My Eyes
- Artist: Daddy Got This Account
- Description: no need for a description, poem explains it all. no, my mom did not die. she is alive. i just.. i've had this expierence with my friend and decided to write in in my perspective as if it were happening to me.
- Date: 11/14/2009
- Tags: close eyes
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Comments (2 Comments)
- onionio - 01/30/2012
- I like the concept and your rhythm was decent but it could be improved. There were quite a few spelling and grammatical errors though, and they became very distracting. I suggest you proof read and work a little more on the rhythm. smile
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- 290DarkStars - 11/17/2009
- . . . Im speachless, trying to hold back my moist eyes, Man, that was beautiful. It makes me cry thinking about innocent death, even when its so simple. 5/5. congrats Luna, your friend should be proud.
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