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Some may say theres no such thing as the girl of your dreams but i say other whise i found that girl .....
Shes beautiful .......
Shes Sweet.......
Shes mine......
as i search the deepest and the darkest parts of my heart i dig away at my soul and more, more i see her love for me is growing........
i will love her as she has loved me but as we love each other more and more i become lazy i become lazy not willing to work with her....
sorrow over comes my love for her as i start to think what i could have done to keep her what i could have done diffrently mabey i could have listend to her more or mabey kissed her more what is it what could i have done wrong.....
she says "i love you" and, and she means it ...
i say "im sorry i hurt you and im sorry i left".........
she has nothing to say but " ive moved on"
all hell breaks loose as i hear her words over and over again sadning i weep in my pillow i wimper at night as i sleep alone all i can say is that.........
"im sorry, my love"
this, this little part of my life is called regret .....
i regret hurting her cheating on her i regret every thing i did wrong i.....
I regret.... =C
then come to find out .......
she killed her self because i left her i regret my those words "its over"
Shes beautiful......
Shes sweeet......
Shes no longer mine,....... shes gone now =(
(and as i recall my religion people who killl them selfs go to hell if this is true she gone to a worse place then earth)
i cry every morning and night wishing i was with her in hell but i cant do anything about it beause she told me to live on so i did
these are the last words the told me
" i love you.......forever"
- Title: Regret
- Artist: Plushie69
- Description: this little pices of my heart is all the memorys i have left of her befor she......
- Date: 01/11/2010
- Tags: regret
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Comments (7 Comments)
- l rosie-posie l - 01/12/2010
- You did a good job at showing emotion in this piece. Every well done.
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- Plushie69 - 01/12/2010
- ty very much every one for ur feed bak ^^ (this is a true story)
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- Lady NightFire - 01/12/2010
- It waz very heartfelt.
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- steph_emogirl_93 - 01/12/2010
- =O that was.. wow.. my eyes started 2 tear up... it was really pretty in an way.. hehe if that makes sense... hm.. a few spelling errors n such but deff 5/5 =]
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- MetalHeadKendra - 01/11/2010
- Wow... That Actually Should Want To Bring A Tear To A Persons Eye... If Not, Then Your A Stone Hearted Jerk... -Shrugs- Look At What That Makes Me... But This Is Great, A 5/5...
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- Pimpmans Gurl - 01/11/2010
- nice one and it was a sweet and sad one but as wolftamer said just improve the grammar and spelling more accurately and you will get the good rating! ^^
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- Flying paper airplanes - 01/11/2010
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wow.....That was sad and touching.*crying* that's sad..I wonder though if it's true if you commit suicide to you go to hell. hmm....
The spelling errors put off the effect a little but otherwise....so sad....so touching.....ahh..really good! - Report As Spam