Black Night in My Eyes

• Artist: Nikkei-chan
• Description: I made this poem for a friend and I hope they like it
• Date: 01/25/2010
• Tags: black night eyes

In my eyes there is no escape of the dark night because I'm never in a place of comfort
Happiness is like a feeling that people feel that taunt me because people will not exept me
I am alone and no one will notice the pain I'm feeling and I suffer from the unwantedness
When I am alone and yet surrounded by people no one will acknowledge me
Because of the lonleyness I suffer I feel the need to end my life and start over so no one knows me
Everyone wonders why people commit to suicide but yet they don't think of how they treat people affect the way people die and therfore people die from suicide because of the way they are treated
And no one ever acknowledges this because most people never feel these feelings that they do because they were accepted
Don't ever not accept someone because of how they look or how popular they are because a good person isn't always the best looking or most popular but even the most unpopular and even the most unatractive can be the best person
But they never get acknowledged and they kill themselves and then our world will be an even worse place to live because there wil be less people who care than people who do actualy care

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

Emi, yes i agree stress is a good reason, but ur example is weak. its just most ppls daily lives. how bout something more serious, an actual reason to kill oneself. perhaps like someone who has been alone with no one to turn to in their entire life. a family that wants their child to die and urges them with degrading remarks. someone who is severe poverty. the list goes on, trust me.

[Nikkei-chan]

That is a very good point, but I was basing this poem on the way I felt before, and on how my friend was feeling, because i agree with you but this was from our point of veiw.

[Lucky-Emi]

very true. but there are other reasons for suicide, like stress. when i had a ton of homework, four instruments to practice, about 10 chores, and a test the next morning i almost thought about it.