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She is knocking on your door.
Waiting for a answer.
And the light shines bright through your house.
But you do not answer.
You sit there, like she was never born.
You lay there as if she is a wall.
She starts to bang on the door
Waiting and pleading for a answer.
Nobody answers.
And begs for a answer, no one comes.
Does he hear the girl outside?
Does he care at all?
Why won't he answer the door.
"Answer the door!"
She screams, she is filled with sadness and anger.
Finally she stops knocking on the door.
She has finally given up, still she is by the door.
On her knees crying softly.
Rain starts to pour down on her head.
Her tears can not stop.
The light in the house turns off.
He opens the door but...
Passes her like she is a ghost.
She stares at him walking away, tears running down her cheeks.
He doesn't look back.
She screams at him.
He does not hear her calls.
Her voice shrivels up.
Slowly she is turning to dust.
And with the rain, she falls.
Thinking, and heartbroken.
For her love.
- by Dolly Akezai |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/27/2010 |
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- Title: Knocking On Your Door My Love
- Artist: Dolly Akezai
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Description:
This is how feel right now, towards my boyfriend Mike. We rarely talk anymore or see each other, It's like I don't even have him anymore.Rate and Comment please.
I really love him, but lately I don't and I feel ignored, and lonely...well you get the point. - Date: 02/27/2010
- Tags: knocking your door love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Maemi_Irie - 03/02/2010
- deep x.x
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- Hibernating Goldfish - 02/27/2010
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oh my gosh, that is really deep akezia. i kinda know how you feel. my friends all seem to be having this kind of feeling more and more each day.
keep writing. you are good at it. really good :3 - Report As Spam
- Bleiu - 02/27/2010
- wow grunny thats deep. i like the way it rymes. i can picture people doing this to others ; -;
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