Go Crazy

• Artist: Jun Valson
• Description: This poem is about release. People go day by day bottling things in, and feeling miserable about it until they finally snap and do something all together stupid... like suicide or mass murder.
• Date: 03/09/2010
• Tags: crazy rage insanity suicide prevention

This mix of blindness and blandness-
Don’t you feel it?
Aren’t you numbed by it?
Feel Crazy?
Go for it
Do something crazy!

It’s better than then the other option
An immortal end to a mortal life
Go nuts!
Go crazy!
Do something crazy.

Rise up with sporks of silver
And stab the source of you ill
They think you’re unsettled-
Make them think your MAD!
Crazy!
Go crazy!

Ectoplasm and c**
Blood, sweat, and tears
Spilt from your brain
Never be ashamed…
Dejected, rejected, and shunned
But never ashamed…
Go crazy.

Comments

[Syrazel Moonfyre]

=O I think it's good, though I think it's too jagged feeling in expression when I read it. Caps and exclamation marks interfere a little, but that leads me to think it would sound great screamed through a microphone with an awsm guitar duo and drums cool Be very good as a song, not so good as a poem. 3nodding

[SighingNight]

Hmm I like it. Doesn't ryhme like the poem's I know but it really does make you think ^^ I'd give it a 4 ^^