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Hello
Do you see my intentions
Of trying not to lie
How every time I say hello
I’m thinking of saying goodbye
I want to hurt you
Before you can destroy me
But for some reason
I can’t seem to leave
I always think about you
Tie your name to mine
Dream of marrying you
And our love lasting all time
I try to be logical
To think before I act
But you take my breath away
Then nothing is a fact
I lose all sense
Of who I thought I was
All I remember now
Is everything your touch does
So while I’m in your arms
I will only say hello
And forget all the thoughts
I thought I used to know
- by iiEatChurBrains |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/21/2010 |
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- Title: Hello
- Artist: iiEatChurBrains
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Description:
I wrote this about this guy who's special to me, But we've been having issues due to my fear of commitment.
Please, honest critiquing, but no need to be harsh. - Date: 03/21/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- popsinger102 - 06/03/2010
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I dont feel sad anymore
^^
the last poem made me all glumy!
Sweet writing dudette
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- wolf king sarutobi - 03/22/2010
- fear is a strang thing, sumtimes the only way to overcome it is to face it head on, and even if it go's wrong, you'll become a better person because of it, it's a great poem ^^
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