Carry Me On

• Artist: 2_Liz_24_Heart_4
• Description: This poem is about how sometimes you can feel like you just can't go on, and you lean on your friends for support and ask them to pull you forward and do everything for you. When you just feel sad and don't wanna go on and your friends come and try to help you and save you. Please leave critizism! Enjoy!! ^_^
• Date: 03/27/2010
• Tags: carry

I feel so weak,
Lying here alone,
I just want to sleep,
But I know I can't,
Cause nothing's right,
But nothing is ever wrong,

It's always been just me,
Holding on alone,
Except for when you're here,
Holding me up,
Supporting my weight,
Helping me stand,
So I never fall,

I love the way,
You're there for me,
To save me,
And to protect me,
When I can't go any more,
When I have no strength,
To carry on,

I love the way,
No matter what happens,
No matter what's there,
Blocking my path,
And holding me back,
You're always there,
To Carry Me On.

Comments

[Blackening_Stars]

Very nicely done poem.It is very true,and amazing.
It really reminds me of what I am feeling most of my life time.
5/5.
<3 smile

[Andri_pageya]

hm... I think it's good. yeah...
Good...
Better...
Yess!
Good!

[2_Liz_24_Heart_4]

ha ha lolz okay i guess ill change that just in case someone might base their vote on stuff like that and thnx!! ^_^

[Poetess Kaylee]

Very excellent. It's great to fine some good poems from here and there, though that "cuz" thing there...ehh..yeah.. I'll give you 5 regardless.