Religulous

• Artist: SilvertongueSagittarius
• Description: NaPoWriMo day 14. Just a small attack on christianity
• Date: 04/14/2010
• Tags: religulous

Your God is a jealous one
what a flaw for a one so strong
Virgin vindication
Horus also had twelve deciples
he was a healer
and he too died
and was ressurected
Mithrus was born on the tewnty-fifth of december
he too died
and was ressurected on the third day
Repeating rants of restoration
what preservation can be offered
when leaders arent bothered
to check facts
Salt Lake City has replaced the Vatican
for religious beligerence
Kolob reigns supreme over the Universe
And I could argue that autistics speak in tounges

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

@Wolf: Thanks, but I will NEVER censor myself. If it offends, good.

[la haine pacifique]

really good, but be careful about what you say... the autism comment, while semi-true (i have a friend with autism who speaks english, ASL, and spanish) can be kind of hurtlful... i have autism and so does my brother ryan, so please be careful about what you say... other than that, good job, you^^ 5/5

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

This is actually gonna become a longer, spoken word style poem. I usually write small free verses following one consept to expand on later

[Echo Ligeia]

Good ideas, and I liked the style of the beginning and end, but I think you somehow lost your rhythm in the middle.The vivid images suddenly die as you communicate the stories of Horus and Mithrus. Otherwise, nice work.

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

Actually, Mithrus did die, so goes the legend. And the signifigance of the 25 is due to that myth, and a paegan celebration. That is why Christians celebrate christmas on that day. Get YOUR facts straight. idiot

[Holliden]

it is said that mithrus was born on Dec. 25th, but Jesus wasn't born on that day. There has been nothing found that said mithrus died, so how can he be resurrected?
GET YOUR FACTS STRAIGHT PEOPLE!!!