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Two little sisters went walking one day,
Partly for exercise, partly for play.
They took with them kites which they wanted to fly
One a big centipede, one a great butterfly.
Then up in a moment the kites floated high
Like dragons that seemed to be touching the sky!
- Title: Two little Sisters
- Artist: nammy124
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Description:
is a chinese nursery rhyme
- Date: 04/30/2010
- Tags: little sisters
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Comments (2 Comments)
- White Lights Reprisal - 11/10/2010
- oh wow! I really like this. 5/5!
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- Eternal Remembrance - 04/30/2010
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Great job, really has a great cheery effect to it ^_^
We need more stuff like this in the art arena, everything seems to be so negative. Well, as a fellow writer, I like it when people comment my stuff, and the longer the better right?
Plus, that makes it more interesting to read. I love how the kites are personified as dragons, and it adds a lot to the story =D
All in all, *ahem* I personally give your short poem a 5/5, and hope that everyone else who rates this, and takes the tim - Report As Spam
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