i lie there

• Artist: takoz da emo
• Description: this is really how i feel
• Date: 05/07/2010
• Tags: poemorsong

i lie there tonight with the thought of u
in my head .
i love u with all my heart,
but now i have to go tonight
i start a new life in my heart
leaving the pain and darkness behind
i must feel the happiness
i once had in my life
why am i here i say to my self in this honorable earth
i keep the silence in my head
so no one will figure out who or what i am





what should i put next ?

Comments

[Sally Olive]

I kinda feel that way too, maybe do more on how you feel.

[takoz da emo]

ok ok

[Kathyann97]

whatever you want. But I would suggest putting in some punctuation.