What Is This?

• Artist: IrksomeCat
• Description: I know it's not very good, but please bear with me and leave some comments to help. Thanks <3
  ....
  I do wish he would tell me the truth, though... ):
• Date: 05/20/2010
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Always smiling at my jokes,
Never failing to make me laugh,
Can't seem to even make me mad,
I can't get jealous for a second,
And wouldn't dream to complain,
But somehow I can't help but think,
That you treat this like a game....

Is this just some kind of joke?
And I just can't help but note
That you hesitate everytime
I try to take us farther.
What is this?

Comments

[IrksomeCat]

Thanks, Ash. I'm trying to work on that. :3

[Ash-Max1]

it good but more lenghth but you have some petential to be a great poet

[IrksomeCat]

Thanks, I'll try to work on that. <3

[XxilledxX]

I THOUGHT IT NEED MORE LENGTH BUT ALL IN ALL IT WAS GOOD1