- We dance the night away, underneath the stars. Hand in hand. Letting the music guide us. Dancing through the light of love. In the shadows of hope. Our hearts beating together, we're meant to be one. We are two halves of a whole. There's only one thing I want and only one thing i need, is you and your love which has set me free.
- by Xo Hells Angel oX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/04/2010 |
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- Title: The Light Of Love
- Artist: Xo Hells Angel oX
- Description: I want to know if my poetry is any good. Comments??? I want to know if i should keep writing poetry.
- Date: 08/04/2010
- Tags: light love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- runescape_freak711 - 08/19/2010
- umm inamberclad? calm down maybe a little.spelling dont matter only the words you use.and yes i think u should keep writing poems!you are really good.
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- Xo Hells Angel oX - 08/14/2010
- yes i have the paper...
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- InAmberClad117 - 08/13/2010
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um...
1) It's spelled Copyright
2) do you actually have the paper that signifies your ownership of the work?
3) Decent work. I would suggest a more Dynamic structure that exemplifies the Dancing theme. - Report As Spam
- Cloom - 08/06/2010
- You should keep writing poems! And poetry!!! I lovce it!!! It's life arisen again beautiful!
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- Xo Hells Angel oX - 08/05/2010
- haha yeah i didnt just wanted to put it. cuz, people have stolen my poems before >.> thanks though
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- I screwed Princess Peach - 08/04/2010
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this is nice. you don't necessarily have to put copywrighted unless you actually copied it. then, your in trouble. >.>
anyways, nice poem. - Report As Spam
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